Of silence, love and agony

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walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-09-07 08:05 PM

Following
known footsteps
to complete the cycle
of silence
love
and agony
Knowing the road too well
yet choosing to put up with it
again
A drink to celebrate
numbing the senses seems to be best
when loving you is not enough
Starting from scratch
your love doesn't change
but mine might

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

1 posted 2001-09-07 10:29 PM

Your poem is describing my life story,
especially the part ..

Knowing the road too well
yet choosing to put up with it
again

Very Good work (hugs)
<3 RosePetal

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

2 posted 2001-09-07 11:31 PM

walker,

the lines that RosePetal pointed out were the ones i liked particularly too...

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

3 posted 2001-09-08 02:50 AM

Following
known footsteps
to complete the cycle
of silence
love
and agony
Knowing the road too well
yet choosing to put up with it
again
A drink to celebrate
numbing the senses seems to be best
when loving you is not enough
Starting from scratch
your love doesn't change
but mine might

walker---these were my favorite lines. lol
Seriously, I think this is the most consise, effective, core writing I've read of yours. I am awed at an hour when being impressed takes more energy than I thought I had. Great write!

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2001-09-08 02:52 PM

walker - words of truth, and of what is real. A truly meaningful writing...

BC

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2001-09-08 02:58 PM

Very profound write....Enjoyed!! Nancy.

~Time has cast a spell on you
so you won't ever forget me~

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2001-09-08 06:35 PM

Wow, I have to say I can feel the pain here, and understand it all too well. Very good right.
Sandra

RSEvans
Senior Member

since 1999-10-23

Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA

7 posted 2001-09-08 06:37 PM

Felt it like it were my own

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