Open Poetry #15 |
Yak |
2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Wonder why talk’s cheap Supply’s greater than demand Yak Yak Yak Yak Yak Philosophical… Loquaciously garrulous Don’t get me started |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Clever and concise -- I love the first two lines especially and the ending has a nice "back to one" loop to it... Cool. -MVS "It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Then I'll tiptoe right out...smiling all the way! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Heh heh I had to smile! Enjoyable! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
2DaLimit~ LOL ! I like this~ Cool Senryu~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
How true. Supply greater than demand. Brilliant Tracey If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Yeah...gotta agree. Those southern Texans always did have a way with words...hee, hee...just funnin' my friend. jwesley (upper-southern) |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
hehehe hilarious Melton! Reminds me of that quote "Of those who say nothing, few are silent" ~Thomas Neill Take care! ~Krista "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
you hoo you hoo HEY! it's so loud within my ears squishy and vacant don't mind that was just tryin to be funny like yours were |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Mark, Glad you liked it. sunshine, smiling- back at ya et, thanks Marge, ~Thank you~ Tracey, Yes, and They say I have a lot of supply. jw, That ther be us southerners. Me jus has plenty to talk about. Krista, I’m happy that you found it hilarious. Thanks. Walt, I don’t mind you at all(funny, hee, hee). Thanks for replying. Melton |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
2dalimit- LOL!! Too funny! I'm liking this lots! Hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Haha..you got that right..the supply is way greater than the demand! : ) No wonder my cell bill is always sky high..hehehehe <3 RosePetal |
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