Trucks (not romantic for Long John)

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Open Poetry #15

Trucks (not romantic for Long John)

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2001-09-07 02:29 PM

They come
Down the quiet,
Air brakes makes noise stopping,
Bricks and boards fill the back of each,
Pieces of someone’s home burnt and torn down,
Crashing and banging till all is gone and empty,
The trucks leave in diesel smoke and loud sound,
Bricks and boards fill the back of each,
Completing their cropping,
Leaving quiet,
When done.

Gloom

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2001-09-07 02:57 PM

definitely not a romantic poem..but pure Gloom..

~smiling
Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

LngJhnAg
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since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

2 posted 2001-09-07 02:58 PM

Gloom - now you're catching on! Doesn't it feel great not writing about all that sissy stuff? heh

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

3 posted 2001-09-08 01:43 AM

Thank you, Nakdthoughts,
For taking the time to read and respond.

Thank you, Mr. Silver,
Glad you liked it,
But you’d find that I seldom write about “sissy stuff”,
Hence the name

Gloom

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