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Heart Shaped Box - LoveSong#2
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Heart Shaped Box - LoveSong#2 |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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If love were a slide down a heart shaped box I’d be there trying to open the locks You couldn’t keep me from getting inside That’s what it’d be like if love were a slide One heart shape box need just sing the right tune And when I have her in late afternoons She will sing music and in to the night Ours will be the song that love helped us write Memories may fade but we’d keep them in here Jewels in a heart box pile through the years I still see you through the keyhole of love Open your heart box and look up above Stars are your jewelry the world is here too I have your heart box and how I love you Would you be mine dear your heart is my slide Open your heart box and let me inside  [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 09-04-2001).] |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
ahh yeeah! "Memories may fade but we’d keep them in here Jewels in a heart box pile through the years I still see you through the keyhole of love Open your heart box and look up above" splendidleewritten...tbc |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Awesome, Walt, your poetry continues to grow, ya know! Cor |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh you finished this wonderfully....you just keep listening to that soundtrack LOL |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thank you three I am trying to improve and this site is the best for encouragement. Thank you |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This positively sings. What a beautiful look at love it does paint. I think I'll leave off reading this morning on that happy note. Thanks for the upbeat lift to start the day If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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elisaseyes Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 196fort worth texas |
your love is the jewelry i wear. this is a beautiful poem! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~ Lovely ... you sing too ?  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Absolutely breath-taking. If a guy were to sing/read this to me I'd melt!! ((Hugs)) <3 RosePetal |
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