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GhostWriter_6
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since 2001-09-03

Posts 237
??Amityville??

0 posted 2001-09-07 02:29 PM

“Decisions”

I’m Torn between Two Women, Two People And One Decision,
Happiness and Togetherness are the Divine dreams that I Invision.
There are only one persons arms that I can Be in,
However, for that to happen there has to be someone that doesn’t win.
The time for this decision to be made is now harder than ever,
But two’s company and three’s a crowd so only one pair can be put together.
I never meant to take something that special out of your possession,
If I knew that I wasn’t the one for you, I wouldn’t have taken it in that direction.
The Night that I made Love to you took a lot of courage on your part,
But I didn’t know that later you would be mending a broken heart.
If I hurt you so bad in the beginning why did you let it ride?
You should have told me that you didn’t want a person like me to be by your side.
I remember the days that I used to tell you how much you meant to me,
But when I’d look over to see your expression I’d see you weren’t listening,
Things like that were reasons that we didn’t get along,
And why the love we had for each other is not that strong.
We used to talk about Weddings, Children, and growing old together,
Now it seems like those Dreams are lost in a sea of darkness FOREVER.

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

1 posted 2001-09-07 02:41 PM

Once again, great poem. You possess such
creativity. I'm anxious to see what you write
next

<3 RosePetal

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

2 posted 2001-09-07 03:25 PM

I'm reading a lot of sad poetry today.

This does sound like a really tough situation and you do have my sympathies. Your piece had a fairl good flow though with some great expression in it.

Thanks for sharing.

~AF~

"Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?"

Carolina
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since 2001-08-17

Posts 224
Myrtle Beach, SC

3 posted 2001-09-07 03:29 PM

This really is a heart-wrenching poem, beautifully written to express your hurt.

Live today as if it's your last. Love today as if it's your first. Lisa

GhostWriter_6
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since 2001-09-03

Posts 237
??Amityville??

4 posted 2001-09-07 04:00 PM

thanks for the replies.. i put everything i have into my poetry.. although som eof it is sad some of it i write has a positive side too....

1,
GhostWriter_6

Domzi
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 288
New York (BK)

5 posted 2001-09-08 09:36 AM

You knew I had to post a reply!
I really liked this poem and as
usual you're writing your feelings
down.
I'm truly feeling this.

-Dee

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