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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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~Embers~ embers softly glowing ignite a single flame seduction burns within your eyes reflected in your sultry lover's dance each heated move choreographed to spark my desire yet i have not embers ~vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 09-05-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ No one works a Rictameter with the finesse you do~ This is absolutely gorgeous ! You grab a thought and squeeze it for all it's worth~ Can you tell that I like it ? Well ... I do !  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
And besides all that..I like it too  Sandra |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
oooh...a steamy sensual romantic rictameter, very nice Vicky....quite a bit of passion and heat served up here in just a few well chosen words and images.. very cool  I love the shape of those...like an ornament well done poetess of the racy-ricty LOLjm A man who asks a woman to lie for him, is a man who will lie to that woman. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Oh,such a beautiful and sensual piece you have penned. Well done VL. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Exceptional embers, here... |
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Kirksters Junior Member
since 2001-07-01
Posts 47 |
Very nice Vicky. This was beautiful to read. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
I can tell you that I like this one too. Great one. Charisma |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow Vicky this is beautiful "Deputy Moderator ~ Open Forum" |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- You know it makes my heart smile to hear such words of praise from you. I'm sooooo happy you enjoyed this little ricky! Thanks for lending me the inspiration for this one. Love you  Sandra- LOL! Thank you too! Janet Marie- You are so good to me! Everytime I see your name on a reply, I know I'll be smiling after I read it! LOL @ 'poetess of the racy-ricty'! I think I like that! LOL! Really glad you enjoyed this, my friend. Hugs to you Gentle Spirit- Thank you...I'm so happy you enjoyed. Lady In White- Thanks so much, sweet friend. Glad you like! Kirksters- Hey you! It's soooo great to see your name here! I'm really happy you enjoyed this little write. Hugs to you Charisma- Thanks so much, sweet poet. Glad you enjoyed. SEA- You've put a smile on my face today. Glad you like this one. Hugs to all, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Vicky, You have done it again! This rictometer is awesome! You are going to have to teach me how to write! LYL Cindi |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
LOL @ cindi..what..she thinks she cant write?? she has one of the best teachers right near by ('course..her teacher learned from the best...heh heh!!! j/k)...i'm so glad you write miss tricky..cause you do SOOO wonderful with words love this one! arent these fun to write! i'll have to read up on them so i can write some more.. hey, i have one question..i didnt read it this way the first time...but ....hmm..that last couple of lines....you have no embers with that sultry lovers dance goin' on?? or..are you saying..those embers are now great big honkin' flames!!! just checkin.. hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I see your embers burning brightly, my friend..  |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Vicky, this is wonderful  You do rictameter writers proud! In fact, my library must have this beauty Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
This is a striking bit of poetry! Good job. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Vicky--You burn wheather you want to or not. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautifully expressed, Vicky! Very nicely done! |
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