Open Poetry #15 |
Resuscitation (senryu) |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Resuscitation (senryu) gently with a kiss tenderly touching my face massages my heart "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
helen - I love this - it is real tight. However, I wish you hadn't written it just now, as my kitty-kicking urges are especially strong around senryus. erk - here comes one now Oooooo, I love the imagery - lol - But please don't tell Pandora or Sunshine - They can be VERY domineering about these things |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
LOL |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Now who would think wrong that passion and it's song sung would bring out Long John? kicking kitties he his forte though wrong it be bad, bad ol' Long John Helen please don't cry or Long John will turn to mush then fall, Kitties crushed! |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Lady - *chortle chortle* - what a wonderful flow of thought here - as for kitties being crushed - not hardly - unless I could figure out some way to fall onto my boots - heh |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Helen, very good .... and I love all the posts too LOL |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
interesting title...lovely thoughts |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
powerfully woven! |
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