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One Seed Show
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One Seed Show |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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One Seed Show there are volumes in words not said pangs of hunger appetite left unfed very bread of life which we need unfertilized ground sows dormant seeds in the quiet soil a word could grow a forest arises in a one seed show say a just word many will bloom flowers will fragrance a silent room "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlickLady~ 'say a just word many will bloom' That's the AMEN of it ~ Wonderful ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
say a just word many will bloom flowers will fragrance a silent room I think I may be receiving this in a different way than you have written it, nonetheless...I find the silence a bit too loud tonight, also. And should it care to bloom in remedy, I certainly would not complain. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Very nice, Minor point: which we need unfertilized ground sows dormant seeds in the quiet soil should perhaps read which we need unfertilized ground sown dormant seeds into quiet soil flowers will fragrance a silent room, yes and an empty one also Enjoyed Gloom |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
This is beautiful, one words does do a lot sometimes. I enjoyed this alot alan |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nicely done... sometimes one word makes all the difference in the world... I enjoyed |
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