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Untoward Absence
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Untoward Absence |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Still he is missed, though tis said, let go neither he or I forget, I know. Circumstances, time and mistakes made combined to steal days of love away. At night I remember times with him those moments of most delicious sin. On awakening, he's also there because in my heart, I'll always care. Our future is very vague at best though hearts of love may yet stand the test. Truly it is better to have known to have kissed him in those times of glow. The jagged hole in my heart will mend but my love for him will never end. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Such is our human fate and experience... still worth it, though, in my opinion... -MVS "It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself." |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
So very worth it.... |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
The jagged hole in my heart will mend but my love for him will never end. Great ending.... Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
hiya Sweetie, ya know that ending just tugged at my heart... Thanx4the great read PoetFriend... *~coco~* |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
I agree, great ending. But hopefully it won't be an ending. Beautifully worded, beautifully written Sandra. You know I feel those emotions there If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sandra, So sad, and oh how I can relate. Hearts do mend, but they never forget.... Love, Elise |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
to expand on what Elise said. . . I've often wondered why. . . great job Sandra. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
This is written so well Sandra. I only wish there were no salty wounds. If only, I know. You still have so much to offer. Wounded or not. Sincerely, Regina |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
This is sadly beautiful. Hearts do mend Good luck Sandra alan |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Very nicely done... and the pain..the endless days and nights of wanting...are the price it seems we pay for the depths of feeling and caring, yet...I agree with Mark..it is well worth it in the end... I would rather have tried and failed..tried and felt...than not tried at all...or not felt at all.. |
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