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Open Poetry #15

Eternal Damage

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

0 posted 2001-09-06 11:47 PM

Regret runs through me
Trickling inside my veins
Throbbing muscles
become inflamed

My eyes, dark and wet
with the agony they dwell
Your eyes burn flesh
Like flames of hell

Temperature sky-rocketing
Pulsating arteries about to burst
Wild animal hunger
Un-quenchable thirst

Nineteen year old body
In perfect state upon arrival
Breakdown on it's horizon
Strenth engulfs me for survival

You remain a bad omen
that struck like lightning bolts
Damn near marinated me
Those high wattage volts

Good always outdoes Evil
Unlike movies, I have no energy
to relive a sequel

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

1 posted 2001-09-06 11:52 PM

Wow - this was a stark purge! Well expressed, excellent images and play on words.

Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Masked Intruder

Moderator

Senior Member

since 1999-05-23

Posts 1231
Near golden sunsets

2 posted 2001-09-07 01:27 AM

Gotta repeat what Melissa said, you've got some wonderful images pulled together. Good write!

You can't wake a person who is pretending to be asleep. -- Navajo Proverb

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