Open Poetry #15 |
Early Morn |
Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Spider webs intricate to the sight all so different, all so right. Carpet of silver in suns greet, more peaceful look you couldn’t seek. Green of grasses kissed with wet, soaks of moisture, a painting set. Oils of nature creating fine art not for the walls, only the heart. All it takes, is to look and see, or is the forest hiding the tree. We move too fast and never seek, what nature has give to our keep. Fast paced lives are over too soon, to miss the call of surrounding tune. Take a moment to savor life, a new world beckons to your sight. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah dear Logan...such a gentle write. But, truer words have never been spoken. We could all learn a lesson from this one...well done! ...soft smile. ~Time has cast a spell on you |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is lovely. We should all take time out to take in natures bounty. Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Tis true, yet it seems less beautiful without the one you love.. Sigh.. Sandra |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Logan: If we but look. In the dew of little things, |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
good Job Logan. it is a very true read. alan |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Fairies wearing early morning jewelry of dewdrops on webbed necklaces...you've painted a picture as only you can... well done Sir... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Logan~ 'Green of grasses kissed with wet, soaks of moisture, a painting set. Oils of nature creating fine art not for the walls, only the heart. All it takes, is to look and see, or is the forest hiding the tree.' I love to be up before the sun just to gather images left by the night dew fairies~ You've been there ... I *smile*~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
ah...was like being rocked to sleep. You have a soothing way about you Logan. Off to dreams now...(me hopes) |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Indeed - Early morning is the best... I like it.. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
We move too fast and never seek, what nature has give to our keep. Fast paced lives are over too soon, to miss the call of surrounding tune. Take a moment to savor life, a new world beckons to your sight. yes this si something we all need to remember... very nicely done Logan..I enjoyed |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Treasures, miracles, and inspiring lessons of art are indeed all about us, daily, and sometimes all it takes is a gentle reminder from a caring sage to nudge us to remember this wisdom... Thank you. -MVS "It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself." |
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NightShadow Member
since 2001-09-04
Posts 127New Jersey |
Very sweet poem. Reminds me of an English project I had once... You have a way with words.. "Its a fearful thing to love what death can touch" -BlakRose |
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deepblue Junior Member
since 2001-05-31
Posts 17 |
You just keep getting better and better, every time i read one of your poems i think "this one is my favorite" and yet when i read the next its even better. I miss the fire, my email is [email protected] if you want to get in touch. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
To see this come to the top again, is a blessing. All good things shall rise again... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful penned, thanks for sharing. Charisma |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh but you captured it beautifully, this is my favorite time of day, and I absolutely love the spiderwebs in the morning covered with dew, in other words, I just loved this. ~*Be Kind To Your Fellow Man, Lend Him A Helping Hand, Put A Little Love In Your Heart*~ |
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