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Open Poetry #15

Mexico Revisited...

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

0 posted 2001-09-05 11:10 PM

I long
for Mexico
in the fall
where love
found us
clinging
green
as ivy
against
burnt orange
stone
beneath
gold
trickles
of sun

Together
we persued
blue
until
rainbows
kissed
the brown
of our souls

Deep indigo
discoveries
enchanted
our nights
with wishes
and dreams
of come what
may
I miss you,
mi amor,
allow me
home...

I long
for
mexico in
any season
so long as
it's flavored
with the
tantalizing
tastes of
you...

~Tier
9/01

[This message has been edited by Tiersdin (edited 09-05-2001).]

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

1 posted 2001-09-06 12:34 PM

Mexico is a place I associate with color... bright, vibrant, breathing color. Very cool!

cruz
Member

since 2000-07-18

Posts 282
Dallas,Texas USA

2 posted 2001-09-06 09:29 PM

clever write and qutie unique! 'hope you get reunited with Mexico and your other love.
nice write!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-09-06 09:33 PM

now this I like. . . once there, never leave again. . . always to stay. . .

great job my friend. . .

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Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-09-07 03:26 AM

TiersDin~
I LOVE IT !

Flowing colors of reminisce~
Beautiful~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2001-09-07 08:19 AM

very nice..and colorful indeed... as usual you have captured my attention..and have shown us again why you are the queen of romance...

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