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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
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Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2001-08-07 10:53 AM


Forgotten love,
of a love never gone.
It slowly came back into veiw,
like an upcoming dawn.

Forgotten love,
of two broken hearts.
Each one pin-cushioned,
with a million tiny darts.

Forgotten love,
of two hearts forgiven.
back into each other's lives,
they were both driven.

Remembered love,
of the days to come.
They'll get their fill of happiness,
and maybe even then some.

death is certain, life is not
have u ever needed somebody so bad, u cry when u arent around them, and still miss them when u r around them?

© Copyright 2001 Staci Weidner - All Rights Reserved
2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08
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Mississippi coast
1 posted 2001-08-07 11:14 AM


Happy endings are nice.

Melton

peachesNcream
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since 2001-08-21
Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears
2 posted 2001-09-09 12:54 PM


Hey..no no no...I know exactly who this is about. Girl..you can do so much better. He isn't even worth a penny. I just don't want you hurt again by this guy...you are so so so so much better. Talk to me about it..grr his best friend just knows how to make people mad and screw things up. lylas ~Jess
Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27
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Calif.
3 posted 2001-09-10 01:44 PM


Don't know if this is real or not but it is a good write....
~Connie~

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

4 posted 2001-09-10 01:50 PM


This is good Stac, but remember what I told you before......don't ever rush it.  Sometimes it is just best that way, and best that we learn before it's to late.  Remember girl, I have been there.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...
5 posted 2001-09-10 06:31 PM


thanks all 4 replying,
jess- i know i can talk 2 u, but this wasnt about the person u think it was..
aunt donna- thanks alot, i know not 2 rush things....its just so hard sum times u know?
  

And I'd... give it all away
Just to have somewhere to go to...
Give it all away...
To have someone to come home to ...~Linkin Park

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