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GhostWriter_6 Member
since 2001-09-03
Posts 237??Amityville?? 
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“180” I thought I knew what I wanted but now my feelings have changed My conscious was guilty, my heart, could it be in the right place, Now my situation has turned a 180 and those old feelings are erased. Now I feel as if letting you go was a waste of time on my part, I let you go and came back to you, and that is where my confusion starts. Why? I ask myself, don’t you hate me like you’re supposed to, I did you wrong, cheated on you three times..But it was you I came back to. Your happiness you had when you were with me, Was like a rainbow’s colorful rays, But I took that away from you, and then your rainbow’s colors started to fade. I lost a part of me when I supposedly set you free, But some nights..Thinking about you and I together And was it meant to be. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
hi, welcome to passions  i liked the way you incorporated the title into your poem....perhaps you could have elaborated on that concept.... |
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GhostWriter_6 Member
since 2001-09-03
Posts 237??Amityville?? |
yeah this one was kind of short.. you knwo how you get into one of those writing moments and then its liek your brain just runs out of gas... well i kinda ran on "E" near the end of the poem.. maybe one day i can pick it back up and finish what i have started... GhostWriter_6 |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Hello! This is a good post. Sometimes we don't know what we have till we lose it sort of verse. Thanks for sharing. Sincerely, Regina |
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