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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-09-07 09:18 AM

A Little Of You

if you knew
that I loved you
would you save me
your tomorrow
the happiness
it could bring
today is worth
a little sorrow
could there be
such a cost
always empty
due to the loss
and take a chance
in all that lacks
some day be able
to give something back
a small bit of love
is no big task
a little of you
is all I ask

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2001-09-07 09:21 AM

Slick,
You have my best wishes, enjoyed.

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

2 posted 2001-09-07 09:26 AM

Beautiful plea.....
~Connie~

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2001-09-07 09:30 AM

oh, this is wonderful......
I like this very much.

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

4 posted 2001-09-07 10:20 AM

a little of you
is all I ask

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It is such a small task
and yet foe some it seems
more like a huge unbearable mask

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Lovely.....so beautifully expressed

I loved it.....

Thank you
**************************

"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of these recurring..........
Of myself forever reproaching myself,
for who more foolish than I......"
~Whitman~

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

5 posted 2001-09-07 11:40 AM

Helen, this is melancholic - very nice pace

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2001-09-07 12:43 PM

Oh, very nice poem, and speaks my heart almost exactly. A little should not be too much to ask, should it?
Sandra

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

7 posted 2001-09-08 03:04 PM

1slick_lady - this verse is most precious. I hope that you don't mind the rest...

if you knew
that I loved you
would you save me
your tomorrow

tomorrow you would not
see if I loved you,
as today
would never end

BC

GhostWriter_6
Member

since 2001-09-03

Posts 237
??Amityville??

8 posted 2001-09-08 04:12 PM

Loved this poem.... keep it up

*GhostWriter_6*

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