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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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0 posted 2001-09-08 02:06 PM


I love the little games you play.
The ones you say you're so above.
What happens to the words you say?
four-letter words--one is love.
I believed in you, you know.
I bought every word.
Yet as the hot air wind that blows--
I was left here, quite absurd.

Now I'm outside, looking in...
praying for a western wind,
reaching for balloon above
prayers to grow the wings of dove.

Just one tempest, my way, blew...
BEWARE--IT CAN BLOW YOUR WAY TOO.

© Copyright 2001 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2001-09-08 02:13 PM


Yes it seems like many just want to play games....but some are honestly looking and I hope they know what they want...James
Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London
2 posted 2001-09-08 03:44 PM


Fassioned heat completely fizzles
chills the heart
to solo pain
Inflicting
bitter
seeds tomorrow
we drown so quickly
once again
~~~
there was a time when thoughts like this were a constant ... it repeated countlessly over and over for 7 years til there was nothing left
I felt this pain when I read your poem
~
Rex

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