Open Poetry #15 |
Friends or Lovers? |
Will316 New Member
since 2001-09-06
Posts 2 |
Sometimes I wonder if it's better to try to be lovers or friends I guess for every individual the situation depends But when love's done you wrong for so very long, your heart gets barricaded And you see that all the precautions you took were underestimated Still, no matter what you do, your heart always finds a way out And no matter what your new approach is, you end up on the old route This is why I feel safer most times with a friend Cause it takes more to bring a friendship to an end It's a harder train to derail and a tougher plane to crash To me, friendships are the only relationships meant to last Yet, this leaves only one part of my heart complete So I have a small hope that one day I'll meet Someone I can truly trust with my heart Who feels for me what I do for them, pure from the start Until this day comes, for love I always will try And I'll have friends in my life to keep my hope alive |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
These are very wise words, Will... I've written on this very same topic as well. Friends are forever.. Welcome to Passions - It's a wonderful place for sure. Check your email for a special greeting.. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Welcome Will!! This is a great first post. I too, think friendships last longer and are stronger. Most of them any way. Enjoy your time here! ~SEA "Deputy Moderator ~ Open Forum" |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Welcome to passions and I like your entrance. Well done! Charisma |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Will~ A hearty WELCOME to Passions~ Enjoyed your thoughts ... and it's REALLY nice when one can be both~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
may you find your love and do write the poem for us arthur |
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NightShadow Member
since 2001-09-04
Posts 127New Jersey |
Welcome to passions, and what a wonderful poem to start you off! Hope to see many more! |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Welcome to Passions...great rhymes and expression of emotions, Will! Wonderful first post! sp tried to write a letter |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
this is so cool! the fine line between friends/lovers can be very dangerous. awesum write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Great Write....Welcome to Passions!! ~Time has cast a spell on you |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
I enjoyed reading your poem Will... Smiles2u *~coco~* |
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