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Will316
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0 posted 2001-09-06 03:39 AM



Sometimes I wonder if it's better to try to be lovers or friends
I guess for every individual the situation depends
But when love's done you wrong for so very long, your heart gets barricaded
And you see that all the precautions you took were underestimated
Still, no matter what you do, your heart always finds a way out
And no matter what your new approach is, you end up on the old route
This is why I feel safer most times with a friend
Cause it takes more to bring a friendship to an end
It's a harder train to derail and a tougher plane to crash
To me, friendships are the only relationships meant to last
Yet, this leaves only one part of my heart complete
So I have a small hope that one day I'll meet
Someone I can truly trust with my heart
Who feels for me what I do for them, pure from the start
Until this day comes, for love I always will try
And I'll have friends in my life to keep my hope alive

© Copyright 2001 Will316 - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 2001-09-06 07:55 AM


These are very wise words, Will... I've written on this very same topic as well.  Friends are forever..

Welcome to Passions - It's a wonderful place for sure. Check your email for a special greeting..

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Welcome Will!!   This is a great first post. I too, think friendships last longer and are stronger. Most of them any way.   Enjoy your time here!   ~SEA

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3 posted 2001-09-06 09:04 AM



Welcome to Passions!

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4 posted 2001-09-06 09:10 AM


Welcome to passions and I like your entrance.
Well done!

Charisma

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5 posted 2001-09-06 03:00 PM


Will~
A hearty WELCOME to Passions~

Enjoyed your thoughts ...
and it's REALLY nice when one can be both~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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arthur
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6 posted 2001-09-06 03:12 PM


may you find your love
and do write the poem for us

arthur

NightShadow
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7 posted 2001-09-06 04:13 PM


Welcome to passions, and what a wonderful poem to start you off! Hope to see many more!
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8 posted 2001-09-06 07:49 PM


Welcome to Passions...great rhymes and expression of emotions, Will!  Wonderful first post!

sp  

tried to write a letter
to tell you how I feel,
but all I kept on writing
was slipping on the tears from the day...

cruz
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9 posted 2001-09-06 07:58 PM


this is so cool!  the fine line between friends/lovers can be very dangerous.  awesum write.
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10 posted 2001-09-06 08:15 PM


Great Write....Welcome to Passions!!

~Time has cast a spell on you
  so you won't ever forget me~

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11 posted 2001-09-06 08:24 PM


I enjoyed reading your poem Will...

Smiles2u
*~coco~*

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