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Garden of the Mind
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Garden of the Mind |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Garden of the Mind To search the garden of the mind To seek the flower's please The velvet of the yesterday In softness of it's tease. Too shortened light, to lengthen night The loss of beauty's scene To search the garden of the mind A place to feel serene. The slightest breeze, that sways the thoughts As golden turns to brown Unfolding season's change of life Amidst the cricket's drown. The cycling prey in overhead The slightness of it's glide Arrests the moments in my view Till blue in silence hides. Just me, myself and I in still A trio all within The garden of the mind this eve An ending to begin. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Very nice.... ~Connie~ |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Wonderfully written rhymes, wynter...the imagery is fantastic as well! Great poem! sp  tried to write a letter |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful....Simply Beautiful !! ~Time has cast a spell on you |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oh gosh, I saw the title sweetie and you drew me rite in expecting a splendid read of another poem you share with us and I got that and some  I really enjoyed... Hugs2uPoetFriend *~coco~* |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
How beautifully and elegantly put. Wonderful writing If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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