Open Poetry #15 |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL ![]() |
I have been walking for quite a while now In a circled path And there is never a voice to awaken me from the fury of the diziness. I have been running around myself for a long time Wondering who I might turn out to be All the while forgetting pieces of who I already am. I have been dragging my heart along, Bumping into things along the way for all my blindness. There have been loves and there have been lovers, Peppering and oversalting the feast of my life. Now I think I need to rest along side of the path for a while But I tire of seeing the same road when I sit down and ponder where I am, So I'm leaving this place within me, This slow haunting feeling that life has passed me by more than once. I have been walking, running, dragging, and most of all suspended in one time zone of passionate reverie, And I must Break away. Some solitude is in the future perhaps, And if not, then maybe something better. I have been walking, And now I've stopped walking long enough to think, And yet have come back to surface with nothing but things I cannot touch. |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
perhaps if you'd look at what you've collected in your walks. . . ![]() this is wonderful. . . very introspective. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
things you cannot touch are the things that matter...as they say, "you can't take it with you" |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
This slow haunting feeling that life has passed me by more than once Ahhh, gentle maid, life has the tendency to do this, only to show that there is another life to look at, crossroads to reach, another pathway to walk. You are okay, you always have been. Today is the first day of the rest of your life, so forget what is past, and take those experiences for the new way you wish to walk..very gentle smile |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Going in circles about ourselves is one way to get a better glimpse of who we are indeed... Nicely done, Tempt.. ![]() |
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