Open Poetry #15 |
Tulips |
wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
How dare you hide from me Your lips are so perfect Come closer I can see In times when I inspect Well least my lips can see 'cause that’s where they are at When tulips come to be Your perfect tiny nose My eyes dance like the moon They’re on your perky nose They will be cross-eyed soon Rapture, a word for bliss Rush the blush captured there Tulips grow from a kiss Now parting must ensue Our lips are at the well And as I drink of you I want to go and tell Would that be impolite? My wish upon a star: To plant tulips ev’ry night [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 09-04-2001).] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*wow*...love this one very very much.... Charisma |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
What a lovely thing to wish on a star. What pretty tulips they sound Pretty read, pretty thougts, nicely put If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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elisaseyes Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 196fort worth texas |
i love your flowery words! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Oh..you are so romantic!!! You're honey will love this... |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Oooh baby! Cor |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
very cre8ive! i 'specialee liked the following... " Now parting must ensue Our lips are at the well And as I drink of you I want to go and tell" |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
yes. . . the "Romantic Walt"!!! I love it!!! great job. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~ Your romantic notions are so sweet~ Wonderfully done~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Ah yes.. Tulips Tunight... Good plan, man... |
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