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wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2001-09-04 02:22 AM



How dare you hide from me
Your lips are so perfect
Come closer I can see
In times when I inspect
Well least my lips can see
'cause that’s where they are at
When tulips come to be

Your perfect tiny nose
My eyes dance like the moon
They’re on your perky nose
They will be cross-eyed soon
Rapture, a word for bliss
Rush the blush captured there
Tulips grow from a kiss

Now parting must ensue
Our lips are at the well
And as I drink of you
I want to go and tell
Would that be impolite?
My wish upon a star:
To plant tulips ev’ry night



[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 09-04-2001).]

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Charisma
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1 posted 2001-09-04 05:44 AM


*wow*...love this one very very much....

Charisma

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2 posted 2001-09-04 07:21 AM


What a lovely thing to wish on a star. What pretty tulips they sound   Pretty read, pretty thougts, nicely put

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3 posted 2001-09-04 06:07 PM


i love your flowery words!
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4 posted 2001-09-04 06:16 PM


Oh..you are so romantic!!! You're honey will love this...
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5 posted 2001-09-04 07:31 PM


Oooh baby!

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6 posted 2001-09-05 07:56 PM


very cre8ive! i 'specialee liked the following...

" Now parting must ensue
Our lips are at the well
And as I drink of you
I want to go and tell"

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7 posted 2001-09-05 08:00 PM


yes. . . the "Romantic Walt"!!!

I love it!!!  

great job. . .

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8 posted 2001-09-05 08:29 PM


enjoy
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9 posted 2001-09-05 10:29 PM


Walt~

Your romantic notions are so sweet~
Wonderfully done~
~*Marge*~

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10 posted 2001-09-06 08:05 AM


Ah yes.. Tulips Tunight... Good plan, man...

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