Open Poetry #15 |
for the love of days |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
for the love of days I give you my nights lost along the ways with the stars as sights for the rising sun I give you my moon you, the only one who sings my love’s tune for the song of dove I give you my lark now that I have love I won’t have the dark ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh*....beautiful!!!!!! excellent as always my friend. Charisma |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful....just as all your writings are! Enjoyed....Nancy. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Sven, Short and very very sweet.. *sigh* You always know the right words. TaraB [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 08-30-2001).] |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Wonderfully romantic, Sven Throw your heart out in front of you |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed your poem Sven...James |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Mmm, beautiful words of love. Very special. Sandra |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Charisma, thank you my friend, glad that you enjoyed. . . Enchantress, thank you for reading and enjoying. . . rp, well maybe not always the right words. . . but thank you. . . Shadow, thank you. . .I'm getting back to being that. . . James, enjoyed your reply my friend. . . vandana, alawys good to see you my friend. . . thank you. . . Sandra, it's what I've been told I do best. . . thank you. . . ------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a true romantic |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
And for the love of your words here...I'd stay To read the words....the love the feelings you give away Lovely...& so beautifully romantic Sven...... I can't help but picture candle lights and music as I read this.... This should go to my library.... Thank you ****************************** "Oh...me!Oh Life! |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Sven, This is soo pretty, passionate and romantic, and reads so well too...like a little song. Janette |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Passing Shadows, a Romantic yes. . . a "true" one. . . well. . . thank you. . . Enchanted Melody, thank you so much my friend. . . you honor me with your words. . . Janette, thank you. . . now if there was only someone to sing it to. . . ---------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
John, Days and nights? They don't matter as long as you have love. Great write! I enjoyed it! Laura |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
*S* good one Sven Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Now that I have love I won't have the dark I love that. Beaufiful thoughts here If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You elicit sighs, even from the fellas. Another gem from the gr8 voice of the Northland |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Laura, you're right. . . . . . thank you. . . good to see you!!! Rusty Knight, thank you for reading my friend. . . Tracey, thank you so much. . . your words are appreciated. . . Interloper, oh great voice of the Southland. . . when you're talking about love. . . everyone sighs. . . thank you my friend. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
May you have many, many days that lead to splendiforous nights.... |
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