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RosePetal
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0 posted 2001-09-05 06:26 PM


There are things in life
that I will never know
The reasons people hold on to love
Can be the same reasons to let go

It's got me thinking about us
And the times you called me your beauty
Expecting the impossible
All while you abuse me

Everything's unfolding so quickly
I feel as though I've been rushed
You make it seem as if
My love isnt enough

Apparently you don't appreciate what's free
Always throwing away what you got
Recycle your love for someone else
Since I loved you for someone you're not

I didn't think we'd end like this
You are the cause of my blindness
My head so far in the clouds
like I was mindless

Nobody will love you
If they are rushed
Like ice to the blender
Love gets crushed

© Copyright 2001 Joanna - All Rights Reserved
Zinsser
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1 posted 2001-09-05 06:46 PM


Very Very well said....
~Connie~

SEA
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2 posted 2001-09-05 07:03 PM


Welcome! Wow, I lived through this too, yes, very well said!   Please check you email for a special greeting!   ~SEA

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3 posted 2001-09-05 07:08 PM


Welcome to Passions. Is this who I think it is? LOL! I know that is vague, but I'm asking if you are the one I dragged here from another site! LOL!   Anyways..welcome. I love this..especially the ending.   I hope you like it around here.

Titia Geertman
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4 posted 2001-09-05 07:28 PM


Nobody will love you
If they are rushed
Like ice to the blender
Love gets crushed


Very beautiful and so true

Welcome RosePetal

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

Enchantress
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5 posted 2001-09-05 08:39 PM


Rose Petal...Welcome to Passions!!
"Like ice to the blender
Love gets crushed"
What a great first write here!  Enjoyed!

~Time has cast a spell on you
  so you won't ever forget me~

rwood
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6 posted 2001-09-05 08:50 PM


WELCOME ROSEPETAL! Very well expressed. I know this so well, I could tell you what setting to put the blender on. Hope you grace these pages again. Soon.

Sincerely,
Regina

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7 posted 2001-09-05 09:07 PM


Great Poem... Welcome to passions

RosePetal
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8 posted 2001-09-06 03:07 AM


Wow..I had no idea my poem would get this
much feedback!! You all are so nice..thank
you for welcoming me and for the kind
words..It is definitely appreciated!!
Yes temptress this is the girl u picked up
from the scroll lol.: ) Thanks again everyone
hugs and kisses

RosePetal

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9 posted 2001-09-06 04:30 PM


RosePetals~
Welcome to Passions~
Hope we get to see much more from you.

Nice entrance~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

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10 posted 2001-09-06 04:53 PM



Welcome to Passions! Please check your e-mail for a special greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Charisma
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11 posted 2001-09-06 04:59 PM


Welcome to passions, and I love your entrance...well done!

Charisma

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