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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida 
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There are things in life that I will never know The reasons people hold on to love Can be the same reasons to let go It's got me thinking about us And the times you called me your beauty Expecting the impossible All while you abuse me Everything's unfolding so quickly I feel as though I've been rushed You make it seem as if My love isnt enough Apparently you don't appreciate what's free Always throwing away what you got Recycle your love for someone else Since I loved you for someone you're not I didn't think we'd end like this You are the cause of my blindness My head so far in the clouds like I was mindless Nobody will love you If they are rushed Like ice to the blender Love gets crushed |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Very Very well said.... ~Connie~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Welcome! Wow, I lived through this too, yes, very well said!  Please check you email for a special greeting! ~SEA"Deputy Moderator ~ Open Forum" |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Welcome to Passions. Is this who I think it is? LOL! I know that is vague, but I'm asking if you are the one I dragged here from another site! LOL! Anyways..welcome. I love this..especially the ending. I hope you like it around here. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Nobody will love you If they are rushed Like ice to the blender Love gets crushed Very beautiful and so true Welcome RosePetal Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Rose Petal...Welcome to Passions!! "Like ice to the blender Love gets crushed" What a great first write here! Enjoyed! ~Time has cast a spell on you |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
WELCOME ROSEPETAL! Very well expressed. I know this so well, I could tell you what setting to put the blender on. Hope you grace these pages again. Soon. Sincerely, Regina |
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GhostWriter_6 Member
since 2001-09-03
Posts 237??Amityville?? |
Great Poem... Welcome to passions |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Wow..I had no idea my poem would get this much feedback!! You all are so nice..thank you for welcoming me and for the kind words..It is definitely appreciated!! Yes temptress this is the girl u picked up from the scroll lol.: ) Thanks again everyone hugs and kisses RosePetal |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RosePetals~ Welcome to Passions~ Hope we get to see much more from you. Nice entrance~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! Please check your e-mail for a special greeting! Karilea |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Welcome to passions, and I love your entrance...well done! Charisma |
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