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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2001-09-06 04:30 PM


Just now I dreamed
I read goodbye
in words I thought
were only mine
the note he'd penned
said "please don't cry
I was just a dream in passing..."
and very much to my surpise?

Just now I woke up laughing.


(repost from open 12---cheer up m'friend!  )


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1 posted 2001-09-06 04:50 PM


What were you doing asleep at 4:30 in the afternoon, huh?  LOL


The Rusty Knight
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2 posted 2001-09-06 04:57 PM


I never woke up laughing....a lot of smiles and silly grins, but it is nice to see a morning person.  Or was it really 4:30 in the afternoon? *S*

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

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