Open Poetry #15 |
Love Beneath The Lighthouse |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
At the edge of the lighthouse you'll find me Bathed in the golden glow of the sun Won't you take my hand and join me And along the sand you and I will run By the edge of the water I'll kiss you As love's kiss brings us down to our knees So much love to be made in this paradise As we are both so eager to please How we'll succumb to our needs and desires As we swim in this brilliant blue sea We'll ride our own waves of passion As towards heaven you will transport me Soon the moon will shine like a beacon As we search for constellations above Then we'll dive with reckless abandon Into our very own sea of love Suetang |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Suetang~ I would type my favourite lines, but, every verse is equally so beautiful. I'm sure you know by now that I just love soulmate/romantic poetry. This is one of your best, it really is breathtaking. Into my library this goes~ Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
A most tasty image. -MVS "It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself." |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Some people can really do love, you spell it out like a glorious scroll written for those in furturistic finding to read and weep. Astoundingly gorgeous. Sincerely, Regina |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
How incredibly lovely. I hope one day I will be able to pen such loving joy. Until then, I shall just live vicariously through your words. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
WOW and WOW again.....I love this poem....May I put it on parchment and a plaque. Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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