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poem - let "them" be sourpusses
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poem - let "them" be sourpusses |
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PoemCrazy Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 159 |
have you ever watched when someone did what you've done a thousand times, and never got quite right? and said nothing? when the kite doesn't just leap into the sky, when the boat sinks, and the face just says "why?" never say, "don't try that again." no, not ever. watch a "pro" sometime, when you have the time. they move slowly and don't think of "can't." and it doesn't sink - except in golf. . . . hey, i never claimed this "sanity" thing. it's overrated anyway...tom |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
indeed..... much can be overrated in both sanity and golf... lol!!!!! or something... but anyway, what i mean to say is i dig your pome  |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh yes often...does it bother me? Yes sometimes...but most of the time I just applaud their talent. Its like writing...some days you strain to get one word to make sense, and others it just flows...  you always make me think!! |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
I stay a little close to insanity so sanity doesn't jump out and claim me... Enjoyed this, Tom! |
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