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Open Poetry #15
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Hollowman
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since 2001-06-01
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0 posted 2001-09-03 05:56 PM


Liquid extacy embrace me
for I consume thy chains
Of hexa-carbon-chlorides
to dull away my pains

Colours oh so vivid
my mind alight with fire
the warmth of your organo chemistry
doth consume me with desire
© Copyright 2001 Richard Pardoe - All Rights Reserved
Voiceless
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since 2001-02-19
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Under the stars upon the wind
1 posted 2001-09-03 07:12 PM

Very nice,
it flows well and
just all goes together!

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mirror man
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since 2001-01-08
Posts 814
2 posted 2001-09-03 07:25 PM

Like Shakespeare on drugs.  This is good.
cruz
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since 2000-07-18
Posts 282
Dallas,Texas USA
3 posted 2001-09-03 11:13 PM

swelldun! awesum choyce of werds.  simple, yet compact. 'enjoyed tha reed.
Hollowman
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since 2001-06-01
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4 posted 2001-09-05 05:10 PM


My fellows, my non countrymen, touch thy souls of the unwarey show them the light we bring forth.....

thank you...
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