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Lady In White
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0 posted 2001-09-04 02:15 PM


                                        Leavings

                                        they were small
                                        then smaller still,
                                        gifts instilled
                                        upon her heart
                                        treasured tears
                                        that harbored fears
                                        and beginnings
                                        of new found start


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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2001-09-04 02:21 PM


I love new starts, they are filled with such hope.  Well done Lady.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Corinne
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2 posted 2001-09-04 07:30 PM


Short and sweet!

Corinne

The Rusty Knight
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3 posted 2001-09-04 07:52 PM


Sometimes nice things come in small packages.  This was one.

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

Zinsser
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4 posted 2001-09-04 07:58 PM


Treasuring the new journey
and
Fear of the unknown

Like this very much...
  ~Connie~

Logan
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5 posted 2001-09-04 08:02 PM


Everyday is the first day of the rest of our lives, is it not?  Very nice write, Lady,,very gentle smile
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6 posted 2001-09-05 12:34 PM


Being fearless of the future now that is a prospect I have never explored...this is leaving me thinking.  Nicely done.

*~If you can't say anything nice about someone, don't say anything at all*~
~* My Gramma, Mom and me *~

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7 posted 2001-09-05 08:49 AM


ah yes.. new starts... nicely done Lady.
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