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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2001-09-04 12:40 PM


Carried on the wind I hear
memories of a yesterday
filled with the laughter of the day
and the passions of the night.

Carried on the wind I see
images of waves gently lapping
against the shoreline as you held me
tightly wrapped in the arms of comfort.

Carried on the wind I am touched
by tender kisses
blowing on soft breezes
exhaled by angels.

Carried on the wind I feel
the peacefullness
that surrounds me with
every thought of you~

and I feel the beating
of a heart so true~
as it is carried...
on the wind.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

© Copyright 2001 dmsmith - All Rights Reserved
Decaflame
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1 posted 2001-09-04 01:20 PM



You've carried this quite well...

The Rusty Knight
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2 posted 2001-09-04 03:51 PM


Gentle Spirit,

This is so softly spoken and tender."Carried on the wind..I see...I feel...I touch" and it all says "I Love"...this is one of my favorite pieces I have read here.
You brightened up several spots on my armor.


Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

[This message has been edited by The Rusty Knight (edited 09-05-2001).]

Enchantress
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3 posted 2001-09-04 07:25 PM


Gentle Spirit, I don't know how this one slipped by me.  This one is a treasure! I love the wind and what it whispers to me.  You have painted a beautifully romantic picture here. Well done!

~Time has cast a spell on you
so you won't ever forget me~

Alan
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4 posted 2001-09-04 10:11 PM


Gentle Spirit.you have lived up to your name in this one..it is soft and gentle...i like this one
alan

Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2001-09-05 09:59 AM


WOW! Thank ya'll so much for such lovely and kind comments.  Your words are much appreciated.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

sigheyes
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the winds of destiny
6 posted 2001-09-05 05:14 PM


Your gentle spirit shows in this one.  I like it!!
Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2001-09-06 08:57 AM


Thank you SE, I appreciate that.
Trillium
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8 posted 2001-09-07 11:00 PM


This is beautiful and I really enjoyed reading it.

Betty Lou Hebert

The Rusty Knight
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9 posted 2001-09-07 11:26 PM


I am glad this one made back to the front page again!!!  I have looked it up and reread it several times.

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

snowpants
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10 posted 2001-09-08 12:48 PM


Beautifully peaceful write, GS...I really enjoyed this one!

sp  

tried to write a letter
to tell you how I feel,
but all I kept on writing
was slipping on the tears from the day...

Terryloveiris_85
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11 posted 2001-09-08 11:19 AM


wow, i really liked this one.....awesome job


i'd give eternity to be by your side-goo goo dolls/City of Angels soundtrack

goodness is found in the heart, not the money.

[This message has been edited by Terryloveiris_85 (edited 09-08-2001).]

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12 posted 2001-09-08 11:31 AM


"blowing on soft breezes
exhaled by angels."
This is beautiful.

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
13 posted 2001-09-08 02:36 PM


Gentle Spirit, I had to come back for one more read of this one, and the comments.  It tends to leave me breathless...Thank you again for giving us such a fine write. Nancy Lee.

~Time has cast a spell on you
  so you won't ever forget me~

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