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Carried On The Wind
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Carried On The Wind |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Carried on the wind I hear memories of a yesterday filled with the laughter of the day and the passions of the night. Carried on the wind I see images of waves gently lapping against the shoreline as you held me tightly wrapped in the arms of comfort. Carried on the wind I am touched by tender kisses blowing on soft breezes exhaled by angels. Carried on the wind I feel the peacefullness that surrounds me with every thought of you~ and I feel the beating of a heart so true~ as it is carried... on the wind. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
You've carried this quite well... |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
Gentle Spirit, This is so softly spoken and tender."Carried on the wind..I see...I feel...I touch" and it all says "I Love"...this is one of my favorite pieces I have read here. You brightened up several spots on my armor. Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. [This message has been edited by The Rusty Knight (edited 09-05-2001).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Gentle Spirit, I don't know how this one slipped by me. This one is a treasure! I love the wind and what it whispers to me. You have painted a beautifully romantic picture here. Well done! ~Time has cast a spell on you |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Gentle Spirit.you have lived up to your name in this one..it is soft and gentle...i like this one alan |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
WOW! Thank ya'll so much for such lovely and kind comments. Your words are much appreciated. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
Your gentle spirit shows in this one. I like it!! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you SE, I appreciate that. |
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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
This is beautiful and I really enjoyed reading it. Betty Lou Hebert |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
I am glad this one made back to the front page again!!! I have looked it up and reread it several times. Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Beautifully peaceful write, GS...I really enjoyed this one! sp  tried to write a letter |
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Terryloveiris_85 Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 61The middle of nowhere |
wow, i really liked this one.....awesome job  i'd give eternity to be by your side-goo goo dolls/City of Angels soundtrack goodness is found in the heart, not the money. [This message has been edited by Terryloveiris_85 (edited 09-08-2001).] |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
"blowing on soft breezes exhaled by angels." This is beautiful. Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Gentle Spirit, I had to come back for one more read of this one, and the comments. It tends to leave me breathless...Thank you again for giving us such a fine write. Nancy Lee. ~Time has cast a spell on you |
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