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GhostWriter_6
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0 posted 2001-09-04 10:56 AM



Invisible Scars

Wounds that run deep but no blood is produced……
I am hurt, wounded but my scars are invisible.
Your eyes only see what your mind is prepared to handle,
That is why my scars are invisible,
To Regular individuals.
You can’t see my agony
You can’t see my pain
All you choose to see is me, in physical form, Plain
Tears; what tears? The tears are gone; I’m all cried out,
My voice is gone from the shouts.
Hoarse from the screams produced by negative energy,
But I’m only hoarse from inside; these screams stay within me.
My internal wounds bleed forever; no one knows of the damage inflicted,
I want to tell someone; but I’m in a place where verbal commands are Restricted.

© Copyright 2001 Antonio Marquis Bankhead - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-09-04 11:02 AM


wow....I'm sorry you are in such pain. I've been there and understand. This is a powerful write that went straight to my heart.  

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Alan
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2 posted 2001-09-04 08:37 PM


To this I can relate. IT is so sad.
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3 posted 2001-09-04 08:49 PM


Wow. Pretty powerful. So much pain cries out from the page. Well written

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NightShadow
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4 posted 2001-09-04 09:00 PM


Really great poem.. Ive been through the same feelings... great way to express yourself through poetry..
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