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Invisible Scars
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Invisible Scars |
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GhostWriter_6 Member
since 2001-09-03
Posts 237??Amityville?? 
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Invisible Scars Wounds that run deep but no blood is produced…… I am hurt, wounded but my scars are invisible. Your eyes only see what your mind is prepared to handle, That is why my scars are invisible, To Regular individuals. You can’t see my agony You can’t see my pain All you choose to see is me, in physical form, Plain Tears; what tears? The tears are gone; I’m all cried out, My voice is gone from the shouts. Hoarse from the screams produced by negative energy, But I’m only hoarse from inside; these screams stay within me. My internal wounds bleed forever; no one knows of the damage inflicted, I want to tell someone; but I’m in a place where verbal commands are Restricted. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow....I'm sorry you are in such pain. I've been there and understand. This is a powerful write that went straight to my heart.  "Deputy Moderator ~ Open Forum" |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
To this I can relate. IT is so sad. alan |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Wow. Pretty powerful. So much pain cries out from the page. Well written If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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NightShadow Member
since 2001-09-04
Posts 127New Jersey |
Really great poem.. Ive been through the same feelings... great way to express yourself through poetry.. |
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