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Sunset.....haikus
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Sunset.....haikus |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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 Sunset Red levels Embrace silhouettes Last sun shades Warm twilight Solace reflection Depth of lake Charisma ~*TMP*~ 31/08/01 |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
peaceful and lovely! ~Tier |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
I love the picture and the poem. Both are beautiful. alan |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ AGAIN ... you have treated us to such lovely Haiku~ I really like the deviation of the syllabic count in these. Most acceptable 3-5-3 and most effectively done~ Go gal GO ~  Love you and your poetry~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Tiersdin: Thank you  Alan: thank you, glad that you like it Marge: thank you for your always kind support, and I like these 3-5-3 haikus too. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ahhh. . .this is perfect for the time right now. . . wonderfully done my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Charisma, this is just beautiful, words and picture  Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
a picture worth a thousnad words? you said it beautifully and had 985 left over. Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wonderful images here, Charisma! I, too, enjoyed the 3-5-3 format!~ Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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