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Fallen Star
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... 
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Fallen Star My greatest gift Has now been lost Left to wonder at what cost That tiny star 'twas a guiding light Brought peace and hope of the Eagles flight From this troubled soul a part now gone Gone just one day been far too long Without that touch can only contemplate Is this my price for tempting fate? 4/09/2001 "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Poignant read here this morning. Contemplative, beautifully done. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
very sad Eagle ... not sure what the loss is...but you words evoke the absence your feeling. hearthugs jm A man who asks a woman to lie for him, is a man who will lie to that woman. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Only you can answer that question! Good write! |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
A sad look inside your heart, Eddie. I hope what is lost becomes found again soon. Hugs my friend. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
From this troubled soul a part now gone Gone just one day been far too long ... Is this my price for tempting fate? =========================================== sometimes a day..seems like a lifetime..eh? your price..hmm..having loved is a good thing...your lonliness, yes, sadly this is sometimes the price you pay for taking a risk... but i think its worth it... great write EAGLE..  wishing your lonliness to fade quickly.. hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Good read Sir. I hope what you lost comes back to you. alan |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
EagleOne, are you sure the love is gone or just hiding? But to have had and misplaced gives you something to look for. Sad but another great piece of work. ME |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Yes, 'gone just one day' can seem like an eternity when you are in love. Touching. Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
there's no such thing as tempts of fate, soft suffered winsome, mused by bait no crystal candle e'er can dim no fate can tempt a thought as pure as driven snow, there is no whim which proves love naught -------- thank you for sharing your work.... i hope my spontaneous response is accepted as my appreciation of what you wrote..... a fine write here, eagle |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Eddie This was such a wonderfully uplifting piece of writing from you....I loved it. It's nice to see you here again. Take care...Sue Suetang |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sigh..I hate it when you are so terribly sad...hugs my friend...you know where to find me |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Although the star has fallen the light still shines bright, and may the eagle again soar into a new days light..... Poignant and moving piece Eagle. Wonderful writing. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
My apologies for the late reply, been having computer problems again!  Tracey ~ Thank you, I appreciate your comments. Janet ~ Thank you my friend. Yews it is a sad one and I think it captured my feelings. As for the loss, well 'twas something very special and very dear to me. Decaflame ~ Yes, we do seem to have the answers don't we. I guess it''s just a matter of looking hard enough for them, thank you. Dee ~ So do I my friend! So do I! g ~ ya know! It feels like I have lived a life time in just a few short years, and I think too I would gladly do it all over again. Alan ~ Thank you, I hope so too. M E ~ This one is about many things, and yes love is one of them. I think also that so things we never really loose. Nightshade ~ It did seem like an eternity, thank you. Doreen ~ I am honoured to have you respond in that way; your words are much appreciated. Thank you! Sue ~ Thank you! It is always a pleasure to be able to sneak back here for a visit. Paula ~ sometimes I think it may just be my destiny. Thank you my friend! Gentle Spirit ~ Thank you for your words, I try to keep focused on the light. Vandana ~ I'm glad you did, thank you! "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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