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Liquid Loving |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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Pour me-sip me-I am liquid loving And I-would hold-a glass to taste you, pure We could-fuse our-souls into a love song If you-would not-think of it as too strong I would like to drink you; I would like to feel you I know time waits that we may grow mature Our love is like the finest of liqueurs I wait forever. Would then be never. That you would turn your eyes and look to me If I had your heart our kiss could then be shared Like soul mates holding bonds of secrecy Softly swirl me on your tongue and swallow Pour me sip me I am liquid loving I want to be in your heart and working there That you would want more of me forever Pour me-sip me-I am liquid loving Let’s make-our love- into a work of art Drink me-I feel-love that’s unrequited Your tongue-our bed-now I turn excited The moon, full of honey, so then it must be Distance drives our love to be apart You have liquid loving in my heart Hold me-down me-I must be consumed now Our love-mixes-makes a potent blending What you-don’t drink-save for there’s tomorrow Then we-will pour- love that’s never ending Softly swirl me on your tongue and swallow Pour me sip me I am liquid loving I want to be in your heart and working there That you would want more of me forever |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Walt! Haven't heard from you for quite a while. This is great, love so many of the lines......I hope you get that precious lover to........ "Softly swirl me on your tongue and swallow Pour me sip me I am liquid loving I want to be in your heart and working there That you would want more of me forever" I hope you get to be her favorite drink! Great stuff! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhWalt~ 'The moon, full of honey, so then it must be' This entire piece is liquid ... Must be that moon of honey that makes it so delicious~ And I'll bet your honey thinks so too ! Scrumptious ! ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Walt.....Wow! You sizzle! |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Good nose,robust mouth,and it has a wonderful after taste.I recommend serving it at body temperature with your favorate sweet. paladin |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
WOW Walt!, this just poured all over me, phew... very very nice. YUH! Maree |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This should be a song. I hear the blues here. Great writing Tracey If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Walt..I was listening to the melody of Stardust. It fits this perfect. Great job here sir. alan |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
I wanted to say thank you to all and the tune is loosely "Music of the Night" |
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Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
Wow! ... how luciously liquidly delicious. Just call me anytime. I'll drink to that. Jaime |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
quite slow-motionly bombastic! what a marvel! quite gelatin with an awesum storyline. vairy well dun! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Did I just sip a cup of passion fruit juice? What a smooth drink, and a delightfully tasty liquid poem. Kacy |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
You are simply AWESOMEand this is simply beautiful |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Softly swirl me on your tongue and swallow Pour me sip me I am liquid loving I want to be in your heart and working there That you would want more of me forever Very cool lines in this. Your unique use of words is impressive. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
pouring more thanks out to all of yuh o yuh |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
wowwy walty!! this is wayoutcool!! i really enjoyed getting to know this little ditty! hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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elisaseyes Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 196fort worth texas |
Is this for me? I think it is beautiful Walt. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
CHEERS, walt.. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
You kick butt on this poem  it's AWESOME!!Hugs2uPoetFriendWalt... *~coco~* |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Walt- This is wonderful! Awesome write!  Hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i wanna wish ya'll a merry thank you from the bottom of page 2 |
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Apachecat906 Member
since 2001-09-04
Posts 217Michigan, USA |
Wowwww..This is the kind of writing I aspire to...wowwww I loved it, Thanks |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Now I'm THIRSTY!!! Sheesh.. Fantabulous poem.. Sandra |
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