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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Fingers to my cheek A question in your soft eyes Answered by your touch. You know... |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
mon cheri see voo play a la manana esta dontknowwhati'm saying but i like this lil write |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Very Good! Love few words that say alot |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I don't write in this style but I was able to capture the moment in this one! Very tender Paula! Well done! |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
My trips to Passions these days are all too rare, but they are certainly treats when I can read your work Paula. You have the knack of encompassing so much into your words, take care! "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Hey! Whatever Walt said, I'll second, and run like hell! Really like this'n my friend! jwesley |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Yes, the unspoken thought.....well done. Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Sixteen words to express a thousand feelings. I've missed this place. Poetry, like yours, is the reason why. A beautiful moment in time, Paula. Thanks for sharing it! Trev. There are thoughts which are prayers. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Its nice to give or receive that special touch...James |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Walt...lol oh you...you got me giggling  Im glad you liked itZinsser...it doesnt always take a lot to say what you feel...thank you ethome...you are too sweet my NB poet  EagleOne...and Ive missed you terribly  ...dont stay away so long ok? Thank you  jwesley...teehee run huh?  maybe its something fun hahaha...Im glad you like thisNightshade...when you are close unspoken thoughts are all you need...thanks Trew...  do you know how much Ive missed seeing you here? thank you my friendjames my sweetest friend...we always seem to be of one mind...sometimes its scary LOL |
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