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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2001-09-07 03:08 PM


I said that I'd always be there for you
when I said those words they were true.
It's a shame I no longer know who you are
you've pushed the limit, you've gone to far.
You took all of the feelings that I felt
and shown me this bad hand that you dealt.
It's ok, I'll not play this game any more
that's what the folding of cards are for.
You had my love, you had my trust
to walk away, I know that I must.
I'd have rather left you with a smile
but to hear these lies, it's not worthwhile.
It's time to move on and take back my heart
I need to LIVE again and make a new start.
I truly hope that you find happiness someday
but as for me~ I AM ON MY WAY!!



On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)


[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 09-07-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-09-07 03:12 PM


WoooooHooooooo!!   you go!!   I liked this very much  
Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2001-09-07 03:15 PM


lol......they say the truth will set you free.......well I don't know about him, but it sure did me. Finally...to be able to move on.  WHOO_HOO is right!  (I don't mean to sound sarcastic, it's just a relief to know)

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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just out of reach
3 posted 2001-09-07 03:16 PM


Gentlespirit....walk proudly and don't look back. Good one. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

sigheyes
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the winds of destiny
4 posted 2001-09-07 03:34 PM


May you travel safely.  Words of encouragement for a bright future.  Hugs.
Enchantress
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5 posted 2001-09-07 04:11 PM


Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened.  Onward to a brighter future!  Excellent write!

~Time has cast a spell on you
  so you won't ever forget me~

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6 posted 2001-09-07 04:50 PM


I understand what you mean totally..
People change, sometimes not for the better!
Nicely done!

<3 RosePetal

The Rusty Knight
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7 posted 2001-09-07 05:40 PM


Sounds like a butterfly emerging to me.

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2001-09-07 05:55 PM


When we say those words we hope they are received with respect and honor...James
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9 posted 2001-09-07 11:28 PM


GentleSpirit~

'I need to LIVE again'

Go for it gal~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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10 posted 2001-09-07 11:47 PM


I'm sure you have wonderful experiences waiting for you, gentle one. Enjoy the journey forward....
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