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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-09-03 08:50 PM


Once I knew it, dreams came true
then one day someone would steal
told me, someone lied to you
Dreams are nothing close to real.

I rebut this claim, not so
dreams are all I have to live
do not take away so cold
Let me have my needs to live.

I will dream, be damned to you
I cannot let go of all
else whats left, just claims untrue?
I refuse, my heart won't fall.

Dreams, you're there, I know you still
come to me, my life to fill.

© Copyright 2001 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
The Rusty Knight
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since 2001-08-29
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1 posted 2001-09-03 09:00 PM


Good follow up. *S*

Death comes not when we cease to breath, but when we cease to dream.

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29
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where insanity meets breeding
2 posted 2001-09-03 10:04 PM


Another beautiful write.

I will dream, be damned to you

You keep dreaming lady, no one can take that away. And may they come true too. I'm wishing on a star for you  

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Alan
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since 2000-09-12
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3 posted 2001-09-03 11:58 PM


Cat...I wish the best for you. Beautiful follow up. Enjoyed this one too.
alan

athena4
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4 posted 2001-09-04 11:57 AM


Sandra,
          Keep the dreams coming......They will be tangible someday........
             Love, Elise

Sven
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5 posted 2001-09-04 06:50 PM


I give you the dreams of your heart. . .

so love, and be loved. . . dream no more. . .  

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21
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In a corporeal internship...
6 posted 2001-09-04 11:23 PM


...perhaps you need to go to your dreams...?  Resolution is a wonderful thing.  Passionate write, Sandra.

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
Virginia
7 posted 2001-09-04 11:59 PM


dreams in line
on clouds on top of earth,
rhapsodied in harmony,
the birth
of true creation

art, in part,
entire worth
within true love's
elation

dream the dreams
with treasured sight,
cast them in
tomorrow's light

close your lids
to open wide,
futures held
by dreams inside.......
(thank you, sandra)

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