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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
If I were a cow And you were egret We would be the best of pals I'm sure we could I would give you a ride Upon my back Providing you opportunity For some tasty snacks And you in turn Would be doing A very kind favor for me By eliminating all those Pesky bugs That are forever bothering me This would be a very mutual Friendship between you and me Now Don't you tend To agree? |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I should say so! This is cute! I think it would make a great children's storybook. I can even imagine the pictures that would go with it! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
If you were a cow and I were a milk farmer...I'd....oh well, you know...nice job..... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
If all relationships were this mutually beneficial, well...there wouldn't be so much sad poetry. Made me laugh. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
The wonderful relationships of nature work so well and I love how you're using this as an illustration.....Good writing! |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
"If all relationships were this mutually beneficial, well...there wouldn't be so much sad poetry." that is so true.. and Denise will you illustrate it for me? but then again I see it illustrated every day when I pass the cattle down the road from me. Even those flies have a purpose those poor Egrets would go hunger if it weren't for them I think. Thanks for all your comments. |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
"If all relationships were this mutually beneficial, well...there wouldn't be so much sad poetry." that is so true.. and Denise will you illustrate it for me? but then again I see it illustrated every day when I pass the cattle down the road from me. Even those flies have a purpose those poor Egrets would go hunger if it weren't for them I think. Thanks for all your comments. |
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