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walker
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0 posted 2001-09-03 08:01 PM



When you touch me
I'm helpless
You dominate me
Even if I'm angry at you
that's forgotten
you melt me
You kiss me
And I'm gone
into your arms
I succumb
You control me
totally
Feeling my uncertainty
feeling your passion
those emotions
blend too well
You make lust out of love
And before you
I become
your butterfly

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just out of reach
1 posted 2001-09-03 08:47 PM


walker - Wow !!!!

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Tracey
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2 posted 2001-09-03 09:56 PM


Aaaawwww. This is just so sweet. I love it, I say I love it.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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3 posted 2001-09-04 01:35 PM



I don't know that total control of one is good over another...but a good write...

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