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Marq
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since 1999-10-18
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0 posted 2001-09-03 07:29 PM


I will ask to borrow happiness if
You have sufficient to spare.  I would share
A portion of my own but I have nothing of enough
For me or we in need.  If you borrow
Me yours perhaps I’ll have ample
To lend you in return and then combined
We’ll have sufficient to suffice.
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© Copyright 2001 Marq - All Rights Reserved
Titia Geertman
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1 posted 2001-09-03 08:12 PM


WOW love that one very much, deep-sweet-a joy to read.

Titia

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Tracey
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since 2001-08-29
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2 posted 2001-09-03 09:38 PM


I had to read it a couple of times to properly get it. Liked it very much.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Nan
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since 1999-05-20
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3 posted 2001-09-04 11:51 AM


"What goes around, comes around.."..um.."You reap what you sow..?"

I like this Marq - and it's nice to see you post, btw...

Temptress
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4 posted 2001-09-04 09:26 PM


Marq!
Its always good to see you, Friend.   I like what you've done with this. It goes along nicely..a great statement/request wrapped up tightly in poetry. Your work always intrigues me.  

[This message has been edited by Temptress (edited 09-04-2001).]

Sven
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5 posted 2001-09-04 09:34 PM


neither a lender??

well done. . .liked this. . .short and to the point. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
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6 posted 2001-09-04 10:23 PM


marq my word....

you have written truths
in lines with blues
and i have heard.....

*****

nice job marq... good to see you, my friend

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