Open Poetry #15 |
Still Dreaming |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Still Dreaming I often sit and dream about the days that could only be shared by two, thinking about all types of things that two caring people could do. I wonder if there is any way that I could ever understand, what it's like to be able to go walking hand in hand. To stroll through fields of white in a beautiful winter snow, catching snowflakes on our tongues as we happily go. Walking along a shoreline under a brilliant blue sky, as we listened to the ocean whispering her soft sigh. Sitting beside a fire watching flames as they dance, just to be held in the spell of a true romance. Laying my head upon a shoulder to take a few moments rest, just lying there to share a soft and tender caress. Looking up into the skies and thanking the Lord above, for sending to me someone special that I could love. These are all little things that I still believe in, so deep here in my heart I'll always still be dreaming. [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 09-03-2001).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Nice thoughts. I will keep dreaming too, we have to. Sandra |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
And may the dream come true for you. What a lovely wistful piece Tracey If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
A nice thought carefully crafted |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Walking along a shoreline under a brilliant blue sky, as we listened to the ocean whispering her soft sigh. Sitting beside a fire watching flames as they dance, just to be held in the spell of a true romance. Laying my head upon a shoulder to take a few moments rest, just lying there to share a soft and tender caress. Looking up into the skies and thanking the Lord above, for sending to me someone special that I could love. These are all little things that I still believe in, so deep here in my heart I'll always still be dreaming. ============================= the imagery in this is lovely and it was a pleasure to read aloud.... Hold on to those dreams GS...we have to believe, good to see you posting again poetess gentle jm A man who asks a woman to lie for him, is a man who will lie to that woman. |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
Who would dare stop dreaming when they have dreams as beautiful as this? Great Job~ Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Definitely great dreamy poetry... "Sitting beside a fire watching flames as they dance, just to be held in the spell of a true romance. Laying my head upon a shoulder to take a few moments rest, just lying there to share a soft and tender caress. Looking up into the skies and thanking the Lord above, for sending to me someone special that I could love. These are all little things that I still believe in, so deep here in my heart I'll always still be dreaming." Excellent! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentleSpirit~ 'Looking up into the skies and thanking the Lord above, for sending to me someone special that I could love.' Now THAT is special indeed ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
I thought I was odd because I wrote so much about dreams....I was just not in the right company....the company of other die hard romantics....Thanks Gentle for sharing your dreams with us in such a lovely way!! Death comes not when we cease to breath, but when we cease to dream. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
The things we desire are free, yet sometimes so unobtainable. Enjoyed |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
never stop dreaming GS. . . always hold it close. . . wonderfully done. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy nice |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A quick note this morning to thank you all for your responses. We just have to hold on to our dreams!!! Thanks. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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