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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2001-09-03 11:25 AM

Still Dreaming

I often sit and dream about the days
that could only be shared by two,
thinking about all types of things
that two caring people could do.

I wonder if there is any way
that I could ever understand,
what it's like to be able
to go walking hand in hand.

To stroll through fields of white
in a beautiful winter snow,
catching snowflakes on our tongues
as we happily go.

Walking along a shoreline
under a brilliant blue sky,
as we listened to the ocean
whispering her soft sigh.

Sitting beside a fire
watching flames as they dance,
just to be held in the spell
of a true romance.

Laying my head upon a shoulder
to take a few moments rest,
just lying there to share
a soft and tender caress.

Looking up into the skies
and thanking the Lord above,
for sending to me someone
special that I could love.

These are all little things
that I still believe in,
so deep here in my heart
I'll always still be dreaming.

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 09-03-2001).]

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2001-09-03 11:35 AM

Nice thoughts. I will keep dreaming too, we have to.
Sandra

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

2 posted 2001-09-03 11:38 AM

And may the dream come true for you. What a lovely wistful piece

Tracey

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

arthur
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 678
england

3 posted 2001-09-03 12:11 PM

A nice thought carefully crafted

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2001-09-03 01:57 PM

Walking along a shoreline
under a brilliant blue sky,
as we listened to the ocean
whispering her soft sigh.

Sitting beside a fire
watching flames as they dance,
just to be held in the spell
of a true romance.

Laying my head upon a shoulder
to take a few moments rest,
just lying there to share
a soft and tender caress.

Looking up into the skies
and thanking the Lord above,
for sending to me someone
special that I could love.

These are all little things
that I still believe in,
so deep here in my heart
I'll always still be dreaming.
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the imagery in this is lovely and it was a pleasure to read aloud....
Hold on to those dreams GS...we have to believe,
good to see you posting again poetess gentle

jm

A man who asks a woman to lie for him, is a man who will lie to that woman.
A woman who lies for a man, is a woman who lies to herself.
(vise versa)

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

5 posted 2001-09-03 01:59 PM

Who would dare stop dreaming
when they have dreams as beautiful
as this?
Great Job~

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

6 posted 2001-09-03 02:02 PM

Definitely great dreamy poetry...

                                     "Sitting beside a fire
                                 watching flames as they dance,
                                   just to be held in the spell
                                      of a true romance.

                                 Laying my head upon a shoulder
                                   to take a few moments rest,
                                    just lying there to share
                                    a soft and tender caress.

                                    Looking up into the skies
                                  and thanking the Lord above,
                                   for sending to me someone
                                    special that I could love.

                                    These are all little things
                                      that I still believe in,
                                    so deep here in my heart
                                   I'll always still be dreaming."

Excellent!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2001-09-03 10:16 PM

GentleSpirit~

'Looking up into the skies
and thanking the Lord above,
for sending to me someone
special that I could love.'

Now THAT is special indeed !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

The Rusty Knight
Member

since 2001-08-29

Posts 414
Texas

8 posted 2001-09-04 12:38 PM

I thought I was odd because I wrote so much about dreams....I was just not in the right company....the company of other die hard romantics....Thanks Gentle for sharing your dreams with us in such a lovely way!!

Death comes not when we cease to breath, but when we cease to dream.

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

9 posted 2001-09-04 01:23 AM

The things we desire are free, yet sometimes so unobtainable. Enjoyed

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

10 posted 2001-09-05 08:14 PM

never stop dreaming GS. . . always hold it close. . .

wonderfully done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

11 posted 2001-09-05 08:25 PM

enjoy

nice

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

12 posted 2001-09-06 08:55 AM

A quick note this morning to thank you all for your responses. We just have to hold on to our dreams!!! Thanks.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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