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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Suffocate By: Noah Eaton My world is trapped inside a bottle, corked in by darkness Sometimes I feel so lost, I feel like the only tree standing, dying slowly and painfully Now I'm being shed at the sawmill of sadness, my home is tearing apart And I feel terrible having others know me and be part of my world, leave me to be I am a jaded genie, cursed and can never be set free My skin is cold, my tired weary eyes struck in desertification There is nothing left of me, I am petrified My life is an Energizer bunny, and now it's stopped, obsolete and forbidden All I ever wanted was loving care in this world, Am I a fool to think that there is someone who could read my lips frozen shut Am I a fool to think that there is nothing but sunshine on the other side of the clouds? I guess I've been simply deceived by the joker, all my kings, queens and jacks have fallen I feel like a ghost, and no one can see me All the forests in my world are dying away, and I can't breathe The smoke and fire can't clear, my garden is nothing but a badland now My skin is burning, and there's no water to settle it Save me... Save me... Because I am suffocating My heart is dying Please tell me where my world has come to be A place without love but depression and misery Please save me... All these cruel games are tearing me apart! I've lost everything I've lost it all... I'm nothing more Than a sad boy Suffocating... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow, this is so sad, I really hope you are ok, and this is just an expressive piece. You did a great job with the emotions here.  hugs for you, SEA"Deputy Moderator ~ Open Forum" |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
I readed this one several times, so sad and I truly hope that this isn't about you. And there IS sunshine at the other side of the clouds....have faith my friend. (((warm hugs)) Charisma |
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