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Open Poetry #15

Let It Be

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-09-03 05:29 AM

Let It Be

I'm writing this on
the top of Diamond Head.
What better place
to clear my head.
I like you a lot
let's not pretend.
Hey Suk I want
to be your friend.
Where this goes is
up to me and you.
Hey Suk I want to be with you.
Can you tell me you want me too?
I'm ready to share my kiss.
I'm wanting to kiss your lips.
I'm hoping you will agree.
If God is willing
let it be.

Jameslee
September03,2001
YouAreSoBeautiful

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2001-09-03 06:18 AM

Very nicely done James!

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

2 posted 2001-09-03 07:27 AM

James.this is good. I hope you get the right answer
alan

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

3 posted 2001-09-03 08:48 AM

James,
wishing you the answer you seek to the question you ask!

The road goes on forever, and the stories never end...

The Rusty Knight
Member

since 2001-08-29

Posts 414
Texas

4 posted 2001-09-03 10:51 AM

We always put our heart on the line when we share a poem and that goes double for one that ask questions such as this, but what a way to ask. Good luck my friend.

Death comes not when we cease to breath, but when we cease to dream.

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

5 posted 2001-09-03 10:57 AM

I'm hoping she'll agree, I hope God's willing.

Nice write

Tracey

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

6 posted 2001-09-03 03:40 PM

Oh.....yes.....let it be
I hope she'd agree

A nice piece......

Thank you
********************

"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of these recurring..........
Of myself forever reproaching myself,
for who more foolish than I......"
~Whitman~

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