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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA 
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:[ It's night. The stars are out. I look at them from the swing I sit in. And yes. I wish. I wish that I could stop wishing. Every night, a different star, and every night, the same old wish. I wish to be with you. I wish for your love. Impossible wishes. Foolish wishes. And so I bow my head, and simply wish it all away. But it's night. So many stars. So many for me to wish on.:[ If you can't make it so, |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Very sad.  |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
This is so sad. But you have company I do the samething. Good writing alan |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Seems I am in good company with you and Alan. Yes, I too do the same thing. Dawn |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Oh count me in that company too. I do the same. Kitty you've got a gang of us now  Tracey If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kitty~ 'Every night, a different star' Yes ... and sometimes the wishes don't come true~ Oh, but when they do ~~~~~~~~~  Nicely written~ Peace~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I agree with Marge (and besides, I really liked this!)...walk easy, my friend, keep the stars in you eyes, the wishes coming...it's when you stop that it all falls apart. My son has all these glow in the dark stars plastered on the ceiling of his room that can barely be seen in the daylight, and we lay in there in our own little dream world and wish on the silly things...and when it's clouldy or rainy...what a substitute. Now, do I wish on stars...old as I am??? You bet! hand in there... jwesley [This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 09-03-2001).] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
o yuh dont wish but i get what you are sayin and feel it well |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Very sad, yes, but not to give up hope. My wish is that you are only writing. And very well. |
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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA |
I want to thank each and everyone one of you,from my heart, for your responses to my poem. I wrote from my heart, my feelings, and you all responded from your hearts with feelings and that means so very much to me. Thank you for caring. ((((HUGS TO ALL)))) Kitty |
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