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A perfect Picture
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A perfect Picture |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
If I were to draw ~ a picture prefect I would draw one of you For in my eyes ~ you are without defect Even though you ~ try to say that You are just you ~ I would not change that fact For I like you ~ just as you are I watch you walk in ~ the thoughts I have mmmm I guess it could be a sin ~ but I know your heart I won’t win As I look you up and down ~ you don’t even look around You are dressed to a “T” ~ I do like what I see From the black dress slacks ~ that fit you perfectly To the little necklace ~ just hi-lighting that sexy neck The v-neck blouse ~ just low enough to show off your fine skin I look up ~ oops I goofed up For I got caught ~ hehehe All you did was smile at me ~ I was totally lost Sorry for staring sweet lady ~ but I do like what I see Me ? ~ Lunch ~ Yes I am free For you ~ anytime alan |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Well this is just picture perfect! Charming! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
There you go again...flirting with all the ladies...and here I thought I was your special one...fun stuff Alan |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
oh so your a ladies man then Alan  You don't have a choice to die but you do have a choice how you meet it. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Aww, I like this one! Fun stuff! *wink* ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Alan~ A D O R A B L E ~  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Way to go big guy! Great write! Great read! Go get'em tiger! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Go Dawg Go! |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
yes I am smiling !!! a true guy poem this was but what woman does'nt love being given the sexy glance lunch anytime my friend "Wink " Hope |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Thank you everyone. I am glad I could make you smile even for just a moment. alan |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Alan, who could resist a look like that? Not me anyway. Thanks for the smile. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand [This message has been edited by Dee (edited 08-30-2001).] |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
YOu are most welcome to the smile. I have a feeling it looks good on you. Thanks for reading and giving a sweet reply alan |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
well I am free now, but well it's midnight here so no lunch for me Like it! Charisma |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Way to go Alan, Enjoyed. Throw your heart out in front of you |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Watching the ladies are you dear Ah that's why you're sitting here Well my friend you got a smile So your staring was worthwhile  Loved it, Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
 ..lol..cute..me thinks youre in love...! hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Alan, I had to come back and tell you that this reminds me of a song I love by Adam Harvey. If I'm allowed to quote lyrics.... "She's my walkin, talkin, teasin, pleasin, ground breakin, earth shakin, little bitty thing called love." If I'm not allowed, well they won't be there. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand [This message has been edited by Dee (edited 08-31-2001).] |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Thank you all again for being so sweet. alan Dee you can sing anytime |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this Alan...James |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
A man that notices every little detail, now I like that !! Good write Alan. Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
This is charming, and makes me smile. An anytime lunch. Perfect. |
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