Open Poetry #15 |
You were made for love |
Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
You were made for love watched over carefully by guardians unknown brought safely into this world to be cherished, always Your experiences matured you, perfecting essential elements that form the inner diamond of your heart, my gold... You were made for love how you make my life's center tremble in it's resting place Perhaps, forever's slumber will kiss my lips Iong before I should ever taste the wine of your own even so, you were made for love, with deep respect & admiration, I love you... ~Tier 10/99 |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely, Tier! Very lovely! |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This is so pretty. So beautifully expressed. That's all I can say Tracey |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Tier...This is so lovely and gentle...almost like a lullaby. Enjoyed! ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Perhaps, forever's slumber will kiss my lips long before I should ever taste the wine of your own A verse made for love. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Lot of soulful yearning here... "You were made for love how you make my life's center tremble in it's resting place Perhaps, forever's slumber will kiss my lips Iong before I should ever taste the wine of your own" Right from the heart....nicely done! |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Lovely and romantic...I enjoyed this one very much. Janette |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I would say my friend. . . that all of us were made for love. . . but none more so than one whose heart is already loved. . . one who waits for love. . . beautiful. . . simply beautiful. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
We were all made for love, but some of us are still searching for the long-lasting kind you speak of in this beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing your love. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...immensely...James |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
All that I can say is, Beautiful... Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Denise, Tracey, Enchantress, Duncan, ethome, Janette, Sven, Midnitesun, JamesMichael, Voiceless, thank you all for your wonderful comments! they are greatly appreciated! *smiles* ~Tier |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is wonderful, Tiers. Truly beautiful statement of love. Sandra |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
This is excellent. You say it exactly: Respect, the thing lacking in so much. Love too often. Very good. |
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