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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2001-08-31 06:11 PM



You were made for love
watched over
carefully
by guardians unknown
brought safely
into this world
to be cherished, always

Your experiences
matured you,
perfecting essential elements
that form the inner diamond
of your heart, my gold...

You were made for love
how you make my life's center
tremble
in it's resting place
Perhaps,
forever's slumber
will kiss my lips
Iong before I should ever
taste the wine of your own

even so,
you were made for love,
with deep respect
& admiration,
I love you...
~Tier
10/99

© Copyright 2001 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2001-08-31 06:52 PM


This is lovely, Tier! Very lovely!
Tracey
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2 posted 2001-08-31 06:54 PM


This is so pretty. So beautifully expressed. That's all I can say

Tracey

Enchantress
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3 posted 2001-08-31 07:58 PM


Oh Tier...This is so lovely and gentle...almost like a lullaby. Enjoyed!

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Duncan
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4 posted 2001-09-01 12:53 PM


Perhaps,
forever's slumber
will kiss my lips
long before I should ever
taste the wine of your own

A verse made for love.

ethome
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5 posted 2001-09-01 06:35 AM


Lot of soulful yearning here...
              "You were made for love
                how you make my life's center
                tremble
                in it's resting place
                Perhaps,
                forever's slumber
                will kiss my lips
                Iong before I should ever
                taste the wine of your own"
Right from the heart....nicely done!

Janette
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6 posted 2001-09-01 10:00 AM


Lovely and romantic...I enjoyed this one very much.  

Janette

Sven
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7 posted 2001-09-01 01:45 PM


I would say my friend. . . that all of us were made for love. . . but none more so than one whose heart is already loved. . . one who waits for love. . .

beautiful. . . simply beautiful. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Midnitesun
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Gaia
8 posted 2001-09-01 02:03 PM


We were all made for love, but some of us are still searching for the long-lasting kind you speak of in this beautiful poem.
Thanks for sharing your love.

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2001-09-01 02:06 PM


Enjoyed...immensely...James
Voiceless
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10 posted 2001-09-01 02:08 PM


All that I can say is,  Beautiful...

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

Tiersdin
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11 posted 2001-09-01 05:46 PM


Denise, Tracey, Enchantress, Duncan, ethome, Janette, Sven, Midnitesun, JamesMichael, Voiceless, thank you all for your wonderful comments! they are greatly appreciated!

*smiles*
~Tier

catalinamoon
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12 posted 2001-09-03 06:13 PM


This is wonderful, Tiers. Truly beautiful statement of love.
Sandra

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13 posted 2001-09-03 07:58 PM


This is excellent.  You say it exactly: Respect, the thing lacking in so much.  Love too often.  Very good.  
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