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Suetang
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0 posted 2001-09-02 09:45 PM


Another fallen tear
Another lonely heart
How much I yearn for you
Whenever we are apart

Dark clouds invade my mind
On this cold depressing day
But the sun is always shining
Whenever you come my way

My life is filled with color
Whenever you're around
My heart is warm and glowing
At this special love I've found

The flowers have a stronger fragrance
Their colors more vivid to the eye
The birds have much to sing about
As they take to the brilliant blue sky

Hand in hand we walk these sands
Two lovers by the sea shore
The trivial things in life
Bear no significance anymore

Love is truly the ultimate
And it doesn't cost a thing
Thank you for all the love you give
And for making my heart sing

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
The Rusty Knight
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1 posted 2001-09-02 09:49 PM


A warm day walking by along the beach with someone we care about...what could be nicer except someone to put it words so others could feel it.

Death comes not when we cease to breath, but when we cease to dream.

Tracey
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where insanity meets breeding
2 posted 2001-09-02 10:42 PM


my heart is singing just listening to your words. Beautifully written

Tracey

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

DawnG
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3 posted 2001-09-02 10:56 PM


Sue,
Again another beautiful poem.

                                Dawn

Alan
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right next door
4 posted 2001-09-02 10:58 PM


I agree with Tracey..this can make your heart sing.. It is a wonderful write
alan

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
5 posted 2001-09-02 11:07 PM


Beautiful visions, I can feel the sea breeze, and the warm hand to hold.
Lovely
Sandra

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas
6 posted 2001-09-03 12:32 PM


Love truly is the unltimate, Suetang, even beaten to death, it come back warm and gracious, like it never left.  Enjoyed this.

jwesley

cruz
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7 posted 2001-09-03 01:12 AM


fantabulous subject! flows rather nicely and painted me a gr8 pic.  well done!

wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)
8 posted 2001-09-03 01:15 AM


o yuh what cruz brother said
Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2001-09-03 03:13 AM


SueTang~
Such lovely, lovely thoughts you share~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Duncan
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10 posted 2001-09-03 03:30 AM


The flowers have a stronger fragrance
Their colors more vivid to the eye
The birds have much to sing about
As they take to the brilliant blue sky

Amazing how love changes our world.

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
11 posted 2001-09-03 04:56 AM


When you find someone that is really special you don't ever want to lose it...James
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