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Love Is The Ultimate
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Love Is The Ultimate |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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Another fallen tear Another lonely heart How much I yearn for you Whenever we are apart Dark clouds invade my mind On this cold depressing day But the sun is always shining Whenever you come my way My life is filled with color Whenever you're around My heart is warm and glowing At this special love I've found The flowers have a stronger fragrance Their colors more vivid to the eye The birds have much to sing about As they take to the brilliant blue sky Hand in hand we walk these sands Two lovers by the sea shore The trivial things in life Bear no significance anymore Love is truly the ultimate And it doesn't cost a thing Thank you for all the love you give And for making my heart sing Suetang |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
A warm day walking by along the beach with someone we care about...what could be nicer except someone to put it words so others could feel it. Death comes not when we cease to breath, but when we cease to dream. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
my heart is singing just listening to your words. Beautifully written Tracey If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Sue, Again another beautiful poem. Dawn |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
I agree with Tracey..this can make your heart sing.. It is a wonderful write alan |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Beautiful visions, I can feel the sea breeze, and the warm hand to hold. Lovely Sandra |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Love truly is the unltimate, Suetang, even beaten to death, it come back warm and gracious, like it never left. Enjoyed this. jwesley |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
fantabulous subject! flows rather nicely and painted me a gr8 pic. well done! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
o yuh what cruz brother said |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SueTang~ Such lovely, lovely thoughts you share~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
The flowers have a stronger fragrance Their colors more vivid to the eye The birds have much to sing about As they take to the brilliant blue sky Amazing how love changes our world. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
When you find someone that is really special you don't ever want to lose it...James |
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