My Own Ocean’s Echo Of Regret

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Open Poetry #15

My Own Ocean’s Echo Of Regret

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-08-28 10:17 PM

My Own Ocean’s Echo Of Regret

there are things
I have learned
under current windless
I am leaf turned
chance to change
spots of skin
the middle can be
a good place to begin
not so afraid to live life
as I once was
put myself on pause
due to flaws
no, I’m not so
tame any more
my body and heart feels
my soul’s outpour
found a true vein of gold
in things I do not lack
funny always carried it
with me as I look back
standing here at oceans edge
unafraid to get feet wet
no longer a victim of
my own ocean’s echo of regret
I shall not hold my breath
this time as I run to the sea
as once again liquid life
quenches and floods me

Picture Provided By Bernie Slicker

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 08-28-2001).]

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

1 posted 2001-08-28 10:47 PM

So beautifully written and was enjoyed very much. Take care....Sue

Suetang

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-09-02 11:40 PM

OneSlickLady~
I contemplate this thought~

'I am leaf turned
chance to change'

Nicely imaged~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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RSWells
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since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

3 posted 2001-09-02 11:51 PM

A tribute to self esteem and acceptance, enjoyed. (roll your pantlegs up)

Alan
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since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

4 posted 2001-09-02 11:52 PM

Beautiful poem...the sea does have a quieting way about it.
alan

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

5 posted 2001-09-03 12:19 PM

Not only a wonderful write dear friend...but the picture ended it perfectly! Applause here. (gee, now I have a new picture to write to...but don't worry, nothing will replace my image of you in the other picture).

jwesley

[This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 09-03-2001).]

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2001-09-03 11:49 AM

I could stand up and cheer after reading this. You sound like you have reached that place that I am still trying to get to. I love the line of the title. Wonderful writing. Peace.
Sandra

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