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Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 2001-09-03 12:16 PM


my webs not spun

my webs not spun
just a silken caress
of thoughtwaves penatrating

the nightmares
of a million reflections
could have a destination
if the truth
in ones honesty
were like a Werwolf's
denial of prey

silence grows
upon the moss
of fridgid fears
armed to protect

refused quest
of written salvation
blanched to never visualize

intention of displaced matches
reminds me
of natures reason
for saturation

the blatant thoughts
that dissove
below the surface
render regurgitation

anothers civilization
is sometimes dressed
in illusion
accenting vibrations
of confusion

such the candleabra
of faith
resting upon humanities
inner soul of peace.

Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent.



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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2001-09-03 12:42 PM


O, what a web you do spin. I was caught in part of it, and somehow escaped a few stanzas. Perhaps some of those elusive threads will trap me in another reading.
DawnG
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2 posted 2001-09-03 01:03 AM


Hey you,

I do like this poem, and have read it three times now trying to figure out all the parts. I will get it all figured out I say, I will, I will. LOL

Anyways, this is a great poem from what I can understand of it. I will be back to read again.

                                 Dawn

wayoutwalt
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3 posted 2001-09-03 01:13 AM


Losty its so good to read from you again, keep up the faith
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