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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2001-09-02 04:23 PM


Personal
Drought

Nothing
Happens

Time to break


The safe


(Copyright 2001 by: MARK V SHELDON)


"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


© Copyright 2001 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-09-02 04:30 PM



Whoa! I think you're down to 10 or less...and now I need to go do some catch-up on yours!

MARK V SHELDON
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2 posted 2001-09-02 04:33 PM


Sunshine:  

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
3 posted 2001-09-02 04:47 PM


Perfect description of my life-how'd you know?
I like that "personal drought" great wording.
Sandra

MARK V SHELDON
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4 posted 2001-09-02 05:05 PM


Sandra, sounds like you need a good rainstorm to stir things up a little...  winds of change can be friendly when you ride with them...

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


kaile
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5 posted 2001-09-07 01:02 PM


i related to this personally...

i just broke my safe a few days ago...

MARK V SHELDON
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6 posted 2001-09-07 02:13 PM


Faterider:  I hope "the breakthrough" got you to where you needed to be...  (they usually do).

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


MyEnchanted_Melody
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7 posted 2001-09-07 03:24 PM




SO many can relate to this ....
Few simple words that tell so much......

Ah...."the safe".....
I wonder how many of us are within it and how many are out....?

Thank you for such mind provoking read...
*********************

MARK V SHELDON
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8 posted 2001-09-07 03:54 PM


My Melody, without the safe, things can be spent too quickly, but who is to say when the rainy day will come?  ;->

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


VAS
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Oregon
9 posted 2001-09-08 10:10 AM


Well, now, I think I better close all my drapes all the time...you've been looking in on my life. It's progress is dying of thirst.

Well done piece, Mark!

MARK V SHELDON
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10 posted 2001-09-08 10:57 AM


Virginia:  then it's time to water it with some new inspiration!  Try to do at least one new thing you always wanted to and then share your experience with us through a new poem.  Just an idea...  Thanks for the read and comments.  (If you close all your drapes, all the time, how is any light going to shine in?)

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


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