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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2001-09-02 02:35 PM


Changes

Interfere
With
Life

Never seeing
Anything
As
Long lasting

Time in particular


(Copyright 2001 by: MARK V SHELDON)

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


© Copyright 2001 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
Honeybee
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1 posted 2001-09-02 02:37 PM



A lot said here with few words!  Well done, Mark~

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Enchantress
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2 posted 2001-09-02 03:10 PM


I just love the way you do these! Good stuff!!  
ethome
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3 posted 2001-09-02 03:28 PM


Our time maybe Mark....I like the intent and content!
MARK V SHELDON
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4 posted 2001-09-02 04:21 PM


Melissa, thank you kindly.  You've discovered the ever elusive intent...

Enchantress, much appreciated.  Each one tends to "write itself"...

Thanks, Eric...  perhaps Time in general, though expressed through a subjective pair of eyes...

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


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5 posted 2001-09-02 04:27 PM


Time is such an everlasting question to me. I have often contemplated..would today exist if we couldn't remember it?
And on and on, I won't subject you  
Good solid thought provoking write so succinctly put.

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6 posted 2001-09-02 04:32 PM



Interesting, as I was reading about Time yesterday, and Memory as well...and one cannot do without the other...

Well done sir!

MARK V SHELDON
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7 posted 2001-09-02 04:40 PM


Sandra, I'd have to say that it wouldn't exist for the person who couldn't remember it, but to the one who can't forget, it's a more potent reality than everything else around it...  Thanks for the nice comment.

Sunshine, thank you, and I believe you have a very important point here -- memory and time are integral components to one's understanding of the topic...  I'm also convinced that there is a MUCH deeper connection between the two -- that the answer to time travel and manipulation directly lies in part with memory formation and retrieval...

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


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8 posted 2001-09-07 01:05 PM


appreciated the thought...

there are times when i think i am growing up too fast and long to be little again...


MARK V SHELDON
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9 posted 2001-09-07 02:12 PM


I know what you mean, Faterider...  remember this wonderful wisdom:  "It's OK to grow old, as long as you never grow up."  Thanks for the read & reply.

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


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10 posted 2001-09-08 10:08 AM


yes, a lot said, but changes can have wonderful affects on life as well as be interruptions as soon as the unsettling settles

ponderous, thought-provoking piece!

MARK V SHELDON
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11 posted 2001-09-08 10:58 AM


Very true, Virgina, and as much as I tend to resent change, I acknowledge that it usually ends up being a very good thing when I learn to change WITH it...

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


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