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MARK V SHELDON
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In a corporeal internship...

0 posted 2001-09-07 03:56 PM


Daybreak

Knowing
Your memory
Will
Never be

Suspended

With
The darkness


(Copyright 2001 by: MARK V SHELDON)

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


© Copyright 2001 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2001-09-07 04:01 PM


You have the ability to say something so powerful in so few words. Good stuff!

~Time has cast a spell on you
  so you won't ever forget me~

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2001-09-07 04:35 PM


Like this Mark...James
MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
3 posted 2001-09-07 04:37 PM




Mark....

Do you know something...
I think you are tugging at the strings of my heart with these powerful words you are using lately....powerful and short that the effect seem to be stronger..

Thank you...
************************



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4 posted 2001-09-07 04:51 PM



Nice shadows...

MARK V SHELDON
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5 posted 2001-09-07 05:50 PM


Thank you, Nancy -- I'm just practicing a technique which is in the face of my traditional style of wordiness.  Glad you're enjoying.

Happy to hear, James.

My Melody...  that is a most awesome accomplishment, I must say -- especially your strings...  I'm happy that they're resonating in that special key.

My Lady, let us keep them that way.

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


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6 posted 2001-09-07 06:23 PM


Yes, you are doing some good stuff here, Mark, and we are all most appreciative.
Sandra

MARK V SHELDON
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7 posted 2001-09-07 07:30 PM


Why thank you, Sandra -- it's a very agreeable feeling to be appreciated.

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


rwood
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8 posted 2001-09-08 10:04 AM


Beautiful Mark! Flawless in reverence of someone who shines. I appreciate this verse so much, for it defines many special people to me!

Sincerely,
Regina

MARK V SHELDON
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9 posted 2001-09-08 11:00 AM


Regina, I'm glad this poem found you.  Thank you for the read.

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


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